I had gotten the idea from Mats about writing a 55 Fiction, a nice one too. i quite enjoyed writing this one and i might write a few more! Thanx Mats!
They wont know.
No they wont!
They’ll foil it.
Hope mom doesn’t know.
Hope she forgives.
Oh that she will!
I fear father.
Your father?
And hers.
And her brothers too!
They’ll never find out.
Hope they don’t!
Atleast not before!
Does she know?
OF COURSE SHE DOES! SHE IS THE ONE ELOPING WITH ME!!!
For a second there I thought no one knew!
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Heh heh heh... So many things run thru the head. ;D
ReplyDeleteIthiku thaan sollarthu, ethaiyum maraikakudaathu. ;D
Neat... ;)
Happy V-Day!
Peace.
nice.. i actually counted the words.. Bingo.. exactly 55!!.. :)
ReplyDeletenailed it man.i have read a lot 55s.including HIS!but this was good!
ReplyDelete@ vivek: LOL!! well, HE n SHE n HIS FRIENDS who were discussing knew!! :D
ReplyDelete@ kartz: but then, somethings have to remain secretive. like a secret boyfriend/girlfriend, or eloping n all.. :P aint it?
@ viki: ob ya.. i counted n wrote it! :P but it was gud fun!
ReplyDelete@ data: thnx! :P u r sooo much into HIM!!!
duhhhhhh...errrr....(banging my head on the wall!!!)...i didnt understand anything !!!
ReplyDeletehey tht was good!!...i dint know abt 55 fiction till now :P
ReplyDeletethis is fun...brings out more creativity i guess cos of the word limit....
Itll b really apt for murder mysteries i guess...ending the last line with
"the butler did it!!" :P
@ vimal: didnt understand huh? well, listen- basically two(may b more) guys r chatting, discussing abt one of the guy's plan of eloping. they hope no one finds out about it for they might spoil the plans. finally we know that plan about which they are discussing is 'eloping with a girl' only when a guy stupidly asks the eloping guy if his girlfriend knows about it, when he bursts out saying obviously. hope u understand now...
ReplyDelete@ ulaganath: thnx! sure.. will try tat some tym! :)
ReplyDeleteIt was this easy !!!
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